Animation proposal blog and pitch

Animation proposal:

In my animation proposal I have two characters for my animation, who are called Seven and Lily. I won't have proper speech for my animation however I will do voice overs for small sounds like, sighing, shocked, and cat sounds. 

In my stop motion the character Seven is working on his computer when he sees movement in the CCTV monitor. From there the scene changes to Lily. Lily has a special sense as a cat girl and can detect cat lovers. She detects Seven's presence through the CCTV camera and approaches it. She then approaches the CCTV camera and makes heart motions and cat sounds to send her appreciation for his love of cats. Seven who is watching this from his monitor his shocked that there is a cat girl in front of him and he is so shocked that he spits out his coffee. From here the animation ends.

For the set and materials I will be using the foam boards to make the foundation of the setting. I will have two settings which are the bedroom of the character Seven and  a flat hallway which is where Lily will appear when she is on set. Further more I will draw parts of the background with paper and make some props from cardboard or thick card stock. Overall my whole animation will be mainly drawn.

I pitched my idea today and from the feedback I got I was told it would be quite long, so I would have to use a lot of my free time to do extra work and put a lot of effort into it. I have also decided to make the animation a bit choppy from the feedback I got and make small card/cardboard characters instead of drawing the properly on paper frame by frame. Instead I can move the characters manually on the piece of cardboard they are stuck on.